i misunderstood that last goodbye

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youcan'tseeme
Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 88

0 posted 2005-05-27 12:56 PM

The mirror that hangs
at a slightly tiltled angle
frames a sillohette of you.
You are pasted upon the wall
opposite I
and your shady eyes stare directly
into mine.
I face forward and cock my head
a little to the left
to fully view your full self
sitting opposite of me.
And when I release my eyes from
this farsighted strain
and allow my mind to wander
aimlessly out of itself
and back into the world
i'm living in
and the chair
i'm sitting in,
i gently turn my head to the right
and notice
you're still right beside me.

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2005-05-27 01:37 AM

Great write !!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-05-27 06:12 AM

nice one

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2005-05-27 06:42 AM

A wonderful write. Love though far is always right next to one and that's just one of the amazing things about love. There are many more.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2005-05-27 08:40 AM

sad

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-05-27 09:09 AM

Your title drew me in ... in the remember of time it seems that we can recapture a moment of tender significance~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2005-05-27 11:41 PM

So very clear and refreshing.
Thoroughly enjoyed.
TD

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2005-05-28 10:57 AM

Sometimes we need to wander and come back to see more clearly.

A captivating write!

Love, Margherita

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2005-06-05 01:25 PM

quote:
I face forward and cock my head
a little to the left
to fully view your full self

these lines gave me a chuckle. love what you did in order to obtain a better love. unconventional!

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

9 posted 2005-06-05 04:32 PM

Wow. That was beautiful. I truly loved this poem. Welcome to Passions (I realize I am a little late to the welcome party, but I have had myself a little hiatus from Passions with all the insanity in my world at the moment). Can't wait to read more from you.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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