Open Poetry #35 |
Tell me why |
jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
If all the stars fell from the sky and a wish was hung on each and every one, this harsh world would still not give back what it has taken from me; so tell me, why wish? There isn’t any amount of hoping that will make it one day shorter to get from here to where you are; So tell me, why hope? And if I dreamed you every night upon waking will your absence be any less real? So tell me, why dream? If all the words in the world were at my disposal, could I write breath back to your still lips? So tell me, why write? A million screams cannot heal this emptiness; so tell me, why cry? Lord please take from me this false futility and Lord fill me with a reason to try |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Honey? For the children left behind... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Why? For our own sanity and because there is nothing else to do... very poignant |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can't tell you the why of wishes or hopes or dreams, my friend... but why write? To remind ourselves we are for as long as we are... to remember... to make sure the love lives on... to give something to a little one who's had too much taken... to touch another's heart... as you have done here. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I could have prefaced this by saying I know, I know a hundred reasons why, but this is what had need to be written, and so I wrote, and now after reading your responses, I know why, for *you* are one of the biggest reasons why, you are all so special and I thank you with all my heart |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BeautifulPoetess~ This tender render left me in tears ... I can't answer 'some' of the 'whys' ... but, know that by writing it and sharing it ... you've given a thoughtful *gift* that stays with the reader~ I love you, lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Wow, this one really touches the heart. Thank you sharing this... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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