Open Poetry #35 |
Poppy Dreams & Training Wheels |
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This ain't kansas anymore... Toto...twisting... in the wind... is pedaling on training wheels while Dorothy plays the basket case... in flee of wicked wicked this and, in case you didn't know which wicked witch is really which and which is really, really dead? just take a closer look and SEE it's Dorothy in the melting pot while Toto helps the monkeys stir the aftermath of end begin?... and yes I do believe in spooks I do it's true... the Wizard spoke... he told me so... and he would know... and no he wouldn't... couldn't... lie and no I'm not afraid today... but tell me beg thee show the way of how do I get home from here which way? no way!... the other way?... there has to be a BETTER way! just follow... follow... brick by brick while munchkins singing point the way to dizzy yellow circle spin... and click three times begin... again?... now weary in the poppies dream... tomorrow brings another day I pray |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Vicky I have felt this type of whirl-a-wind mindset more than I care to remember. But, just like Dorothy - we always had the answer - with us all the time. Be well dear lady. hugs, Chris |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
oh my! a totol oz kick.. I hear there is a wizard around here somewhere -- perhaps -- but you already have a great heart, brain, and courage.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
So true, Chris... We're just sometimes too good at keeping the answers a secret from ourselves... Hugs, my friend... and LR?... Thank you, my friend... more than you know... "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky Agreeing with Reb up there...it is really good to see you posting...this is an incredible ride on the yellow brick road. If you keep going, it leads to my house and back. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I would swear if I could . . . This is amazzzinggggggg . . . I tumbled down there with ya, Vic. So happy to see you writing! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, this is a poem that I can more than relate to... hang on, sweetie... it IS a wild ride! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Wow Vicky!! Just keep following those yellow bricks.. Awesome write..so good to read you again. Hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whew! What a ride you just took me on as your words whirled and swirled and tumbled down the page! Now that is what I'd call "poetry in motion"! Gadzooks, girl! Now I know where you've been! You've been caught up in a twirling whirlwind in the Land of Oz! I'm glad you were able to get your bearings enough to write about your dizzying experience! ~ and might I add, you did one helluvva fine job of doing so! Wrapping my arms around you! Linda |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
while Dorothy plays the basket case... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I just loved that line and analogy... superb use of metaphor and symbols here Vickygirl...I love the theme...and me thinks I know a witch that will love this too Like this style on your pen..very well done. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Woohooo YAY! absolutely love this Vicky. You go Girl! Mxx p.s it's a "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Just as I expected....marvellous play with words, rhyme, metaphors and all that stuff you are good at. It was a pleasure to read my friend. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow...this is fantastic...reads so very emotionally to me.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
We'll talk about the poppies privately. OH what the hell? When was I ever private about anything, eh? If I have to say anything to one who follows the path of the yellow brick road, know that, just like it's hard to tell which witch is which, that which we rely upon for strength becomes our achille's heel... Read "Wicked", if you haven't already. And yes, this witch loves this, and loves YOU. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Came back to read for another time, and thought, what the hey... knowing as you do my bent to share? While some of us greyer gooses may understand the intent behind Baum's story, I'm sure there are a lot of folk out there who haven't done the history behind the scenes, so I excerpted a tad... quote: from http://www.filmsite.org/wiza.html I've always thought it interesting that it was a political message...as such were woven into fantasies all the way back [and before], i.e, The Brothers Grimm. You did a wonderful job here, Vicky...and I'll get any good Kansas magazine would swoop it up! |
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