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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

0 posted 2005-05-14 02:46 PM





Mingling strings even as we cannot touch..
my guitar slides in tune with yours
attentively in tone and time ..
sound-kissing before
chords slip over neck and body
toward a rush of song.

© Copyright 2005 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-05-14 03:16 PM


Want to hear a co-inky-dink?  I was listening to 104.5 and this song was playing about holding her like a Spanish guitar, becoming his instrument, and I thought what a fantastic bit of imagery that was.  I adored the song and sat down to figure out what the name of it was on the computer to read the rest of the words, and low and behold, here you are with your love notes too!  A lovely love note too it is.       Okay, off to find the name of the song now.  Won't be mad at anyone who knows the name of that song, and sends it to me either, LOL.

Love the new picture and Boca too

Enchantress
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2 posted 2005-05-14 03:28 PM


Thanks Sharon~If you know who sings it, e me, I may be able to find out for you.
Sending you big hugs ..love ya lady.

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3 posted 2005-05-14 05:09 PM


exceptional verse
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4 posted 2005-05-14 06:48 PM


mellow and soft.....beautiful...
hugssss pretty lady--


I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2005-05-14 07:00 PM


The music fits you Nancy...lovely write.
TD

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6 posted 2005-05-14 07:19 PM


A drum of hearts mingles...as touches
bring a tingle...and a string's strum
brings to close a lover's kiss.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-05-14 09:49 PM


Enjoyed...James
HopeS
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8 posted 2005-05-15 12:50 PM


Beautiful hearts attuned

Hope

scorpio
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9 posted 2005-05-15 09:07 AM


Delicate touch Tinker.  Beautiful.  I love how this reads and the image it creates.  

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2005-05-15 11:13 AM


Enchantress~

Oh ... cute little goosebumpers this one give me~

Such lovely penning dear lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Kristabell
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11 posted 2005-05-15 12:07 PM


Nice, beautiful.
Susan
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12 posted 2005-05-15 12:18 PM


Oh my Nancy - full of delicate sensuality and eloquent imagery -

Hugs - Susan

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just out of reach
13 posted 2005-05-15 04:08 PM


Just arrived home...turned on puter ... how lovely is this?!! hugs & miss ya!!
Honeybunch
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14 posted 2005-05-15 04:18 PM


Tenderness and passion delicately entwined - enjoyed!
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15 posted 2005-05-15 06:14 PM


Should I bring my fiddle or banjo?  This is a very beautiful write.  You always find the right words.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Enchantress
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16 posted 2005-05-15 10:50 PM


Thank you all so very much for your kind
replies.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

Goodknight
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17 posted 2005-05-16 05:01 PM


great poetry Nancy - you do wonders with many many images - Paul
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18 posted 2005-05-16 05:32 PM


sensual beauty, i enjoyed.

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

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