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PazSqual
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0 posted 2005-05-15 10:38 AM



Understanding

Sometimes one gives up
Someone VERY dear to them
For their happiness



"I can't make you love me if you don't
You can't make your heart feel something it won't"    Bonnie Raitt

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2005-05-15 11:16 AM


You are writing with great vigor dear poet.
I would only interject, that our happiness is our own to make...
And sometimes there is something greater on the journey that beckons us to hold true through the storms; for the happiness found after is greater than anything ever imagined.
No lack of understanding here. Thank you.
Hugs,
TD

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-05-15 11:18 AM


Very well said...and much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
Posts 678
Portland, OR
3 posted 2005-05-15 12:02 PM


I know that feeling all too well. The only remmady is knowing that you did your best to make them happy. You cared enough for them to let them go. Nice write.

Kristabell

MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-05-17 04:11 AM


understand this one~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2005-05-18 10:31 AM


hmmm...

yes.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2005-05-18 02:51 PM


understood
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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7 posted 2005-05-18 02:52 PM


ya can't make someone love you...trying would be devestating to both...and then there's those times...when you know all to well, this person, has such potential...but then, you do know about that....bless you
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2005-05-18 04:14 PM


It IS one of the
ultimate gifts...

bless your heart.

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