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Open Poetry #35

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MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

0 posted 2005-05-13 07:37 AM

Friends,
We used to sit and talk
Go to the mall and walk,
Snicker at the people there,
Back then only time did we share.

Dreamers,
What would we like to do,
Meeting history's who's who,
Plans of where our careers would go,
Waiting for the future to flow.

Companions,
Beyond the friend with greater trust,
Help with laundry remembering to dust,
Listening about when things went astray,
Smiling back at the end of the day.

Lovers,
Sharing a touch and a feel,
The warmth of skin to skin real,
So close that a breath is shared,
Delving where neither has dared.

Souls,
She competed he as he did she,
Something that was meant to be,
The torn asunder
Left to wonder
Left alone
Like puzzle piece missing,
Or a poem that won’t rhyme;
Anymore.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2005-05-13 11:05 AM

I love the way this poem flowed from the beginning of friendship to lovers who share everything...A wonderful poem filled with feelings...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-05-13 11:10 AM

MyHeartofShadows,
Enjoyed the read.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2005-05-13 08:04 PM

lovely~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

MyHeartofShadows
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 88
Hyattsville, MD

4 posted 2005-05-16 07:04 AM

Thank you all

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