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Different Paddles |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Different Paddles I use a paddle shaped in word To paddle up the rivers herd To reach a point of common is Just a point beyond Cadiz The river flows with rapids snow Bends and dips where ere I go I do the best I can to steer But I am caught in whirls of fear Horizons tell me naught of far The night is dark there is no star A mist surrounds my searching view My paddle sets in air askew I shoot the rapids day by day There is no time to stop or stay Waiting for a future coup To see in view a patch of blue And in the blue a rainbows goal To reach the doorway of my soul |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
And what a LOVELY soul it is Sey. Good morning hugs. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Flexibility is strength, and you encounter it, throughout Especially loved this.... And in the blue a rainbows goal Just as is life, my friend, each lesson extending thoughts, and you always succeed in extending mine, which, I might add, is not easy to do!!! hehe Hugs and Good Morning! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
o i can think of a different paddle after reving up to dark's up there, of course, but this sounds like a sea of serenity this morning and quite an enjoyable journey |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Thanks for the lovely and good morning dear. LeeJ And don't I know that. LOL Good morning sweet. Thank you for the sweet reply. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess I know all about paddles and I also know with out a paddle. LOL Thank you dear for the read and comment. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
And in the blue a rainbows goal To reach the doorway of my soul Your beautiful soul kisses our senses each day in with your poetry. Thankyou dear Seymour. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris,   |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
WOW what a sense of metophore you have. Keep collecting those paddles.%% Great work here. adagio |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thought I had a paddle once but she turned out to be an oar. Keep stroking, Sy  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I shoot the rapids day by day There is no time to stop or stay Waiting for a future coup To see in view a patch of blue And in the blue a rainbows goal To reach the doorway of my soul" Beautiful beautiful write today Sy. A treat for our eyes this is! hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes indeed a great site for these eyes this beautiful day  good afternoon sir My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
adagio Thanks for the WOW. Balladeer Did you mean oar or awe? Nancy Thank you so much sweet. MGROVES Thank you dear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I use a paddle shaped in word To paddle up the rivers herd To reach a point of common is Just a point beyond Cadiz ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you KNOW I LOVE that verse... you rock and rhyme on the river your canoe or mine? LOL *ww*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are the clear within the mist. WW |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Sy, I liked this one so much I just had to come back to read it again! Thanks for the exceptional work! adagio |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
adagio Thank you so much. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Wordsmith! As the saying goes, "Different strokes for different folks!" I personally, have been up many a proverbial creek without a paddle and could have used oars such as yours to steer me clear of "whirls of fear"! You could have set me safe afar when there has been no guiding star. The door to your soul is lit by the most glorious rainbow and may it glow forever more with divine celestial Light.  Love & Living Light, EA P.S. You are one who truly does have both oars in the water! |
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