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Extra Terrestrial |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
(I think there’s a very strong possibility I might be Extra terrestrial!) Sometimes I don’t know how I could be so different and right could be so wrong wrong right for others, and right singing in me such an unhappy song. I don’t pretend To be righteous but I See things from the view of a child Who wants to please, Who believes If we all do our best We can make a better place- A better human race. Jabs in back For doing right… I just won’t bring myself down to fight. The child in me won’t leave Neither does it know how to stay. I suppose It’ll wait in silence. and Out of peace, she will grieve; Perhaps, even grow. I probably am An alien Born from dandelion seed Pretty on the inside But to others just a weed. [This message has been edited by miscellanea (05-12-2005 12:15 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wonderful poetry - if your view is extra terrestial then we need a whole lot more of you...I am with ya here - Paul |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Paul, It has made my day to hear from good folk like you! Thank you. You don't know how I appreciate your many kindnesses. miscellanea |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed this  My spirit will rise |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
a weed is not a weed at all, just a flower somebody doesn't want in their garden - but in another's it is a treasure - btw - if you are an alien - woo hoo! Nice to know I'm not alone  Hugs - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Who believes If we all do our best We can make a better place- A better human race. No "weed" would think this way. I believe you are a beautiful wildflower. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so me, the part I like best. And you are so not an alien, Misce~ Your writing is refreshing, and always makes me feel so brand new. "Desdemona's building a rocket ship, but her soul is in the stars" Heh!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've always had a soft spot for dandelions... from the bright glow of yellow to the puffy ball that begs us to just wish on exhale... Whatever you are, we need more like you. *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I think you're a daisy...yup! May the child in you live on forever!!! Wonderful write...a keeper for my library! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Life is one great big canvas; |
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