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car ride existentialism.
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car ride existentialism. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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the car moves in the night like a leaf in the river the only sound are our hearts beating and our thoughts linking joining together to create meaning the open window breathes life into our lungs so we can see each other and we can feel each other and the stale air won't block the way we take the scenic route so we have time to absorb the world through our skin and life through our eyes hold my hand and we'll be connected [This message has been edited by exhale (05-10-2005 10:41 PM).] |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
the car moves in the night like a leaf in the river the only sound are our hearts beating and our thoughts linking joining together to create meaning the open window breathes life into our lungs so we can see each other and we can feel each other and the stale air won't block the way we take the scenic route so we have time to absorb the world through our skin and life through our eyes hold my hand and we'll be connected ………………….. Chelsea This is very good. Watch your breathing . . . John |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hold my hand and we'll be connected --------------------------------------- What a beautiful way to be connected. Well done Chelsea. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Well done. I liked th last two stanza too. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Liked it a lot. nice to have someone with whom your thoughts can link, especially on that sceanic route. adagio |
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