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Oceans Rhythms I Sway
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Oceans Rhythms I Sway |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Oceans Rhythms I Sway I stroll along the beach Reach a secluded bay Along the water's edge I felt the salty sea spray Over white crested sea Waves came rolling in The gentle sea breeze Feels soft upon my skin Aside warm rock pools Rippling waves danced Place shells to my ear Ocean sound enhanced Just move with the flow I have heard many say As waves lick my toes Oceans rhythms I sway Hope ©2005 With graphic and sound http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/91/poem_738698.html |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely Hope..felt I was right there. Hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh yes....I could feel the water washing over my feet. Well done Hope. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Oceans rhythms I sway That line i liked and the sound of the sea from the seashell |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
How perfect...the vision came to life filling me with peace....I absolutely love it...**hugs** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I can hear the ocean's voice, feel the tenderness of mist...playful day...peeks in...Hope, this was amazingly beautiful Thank you |
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