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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-05-11 12:29 PM


Being
Without word

Consciousness
Without comment

The cat
Purrs in its sleep
Under summer shadows
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
1 posted 2005-05-11 12:32 PM

oh boy, this certainly pulls the reader in, seams so delicately, mysteriously, and yet, sets the tone for more to come...

Love the way you write
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-05-11 12:39 PM

Wonderful!!!

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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3 posted 2005-05-11 12:48 PM

wonderful write!
RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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uk
4 posted 2005-05-11 12:59 PM

If only there were more too it
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-30 03:26 PM

interesting poem for cat.

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