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Open Poetry #35
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2005-05-10 10:32 AM


Every one
Should have some one
To remember her
As beautiful

On Spring Road
Through a picture window
A recumbent cat
Watches the summer willows
Passing by
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INclan
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1 posted 2005-05-10 01:05 PM

Nicely done!  I enjoyed both....
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2005-05-10 01:07 PM

Love this!! Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-30 03:28 PM

nice.

My memory, a spring road is a muddy road.

enjoyed as always.
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