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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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She knows the complexities and embraces this duality the need for balance between mind and spirit; body and soul... to feel complete and be in control to have all inner inhibitions released a soul contending in eternal quest of peace.... She listens to my voice and hears my plea; I am not her she is not me but still, she knows me...... She is there somewhere yet remains beyond my gaze and she too, has run this race through this maze of life. I’ve shared her pain along with her fears her heart in unison beating I hear I have been her and she has been me… We have stood wishing upon the very same star wanting, and wondering of places afar remembering journeys through the black of night , recalling paths taken beseeching the light bringing us to where we now are She has fought those battles, and has healed the same scars we are individual, yet similar held in the common bond of striving, and surviving we are strong I am her and she is me......... a woman understanding unequivocally.... {dedicated to all of my sisters through word and heart} I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-10-2005 09:33 PM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Kindred souls sharing a bond...Supportive and nurturing. believe in what your heart feels... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful and oh so true sweet Donna. Love ya lady~ Life is one great big canvas; |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very special time, when we loose our own threads, and encompany the woof and weave of others' thoughts... it is a special time in anyone's life...when we acknowledge that another had stood in similar shoes... this is...a mile stone of stored thought that has been building for some time, little one... and for this? I applaud you on all of your accomplishments! Now... print this, and store it away, so that your daughter might, someday, find it, and say, "Yes... this IS my mother!!!" Love, the other Mom |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is very nice; I love the way it flows! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
One of your purest writes Donna...so much to compliment, so much to take to heart. Very beautiful in all the ways. TD |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh Donna, what beautiful, moving words you write, what heart and insight your pen spills - wonderful this . . .  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is very lovely Donna - just like you! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Absolutely beautiful writing, Donna  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
So very well said. When we value others, we value ourselves tenfold. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so very much. Your friendship and support means far more than I can express with words. I really want to care, |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! A stunning write that fills the soul with your heartfelt feelings...You have touched so many with your words and shared your deepest thoughts with us so that we would all know we are not alone...**big hugs**...indeed through your words and love we are all sisters... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
to understand oneself, guides take us by the hand to the inner cores of others we are threaded to...the connection Brillantly penned and warmly felt |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestOne~ So tender ... such loving testament to the sistership of friends~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Can I tell them now that it was your 10,000th post? Hmmmm?  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Startime, thank you sweetie, and it is sooo very good to see you and your words grace these pages again. Hugs Lee, thank you, always for your kindness and warmth. Huggin you... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Margie, thanks for stopping and leaving your touch here. You are special. Kari? Did I have a choice???  but...mum....thank you so much, ten thousand has been my pleasure  |
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MyHeartofShadows Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 88Hyattsville, MD |
lovely |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
MHOS, thank you for the lovely. Much appreciated it. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You Bella are indeed a Gentle Spirit. This is absolutely beautiful writing. Gently placing this into my library. and Congratulations on 10,000 wahoooo!  Maree "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 Thanks Bella...you are such an inspiration to me and I thank you for your never ending support. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and tsk...I'm supposed to not cry...sniffling with a guilty blush and shrug That doc shoulda told me how not to feel. and I exit smiling, because you know. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
K? luv u sweetie, and yes, I DO know... my shoulders are always here should you need them. Cry all you want baby....HUGS |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Now THAT'S poetry! Beautiful, my friend. Very much so. Jimmy |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Jimmy, you are way to kind to me, and say the loveliest things, thank you sir. Hugs coming atcha!! [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-12-2005 06:00 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl penspeak donnna.. being a woman looks good on you too |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey Dark, good morning, hugs and thanx babe! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You are indeed a ‘Gentle Spirit’ truly felt in this write. Enjoyed!! JL |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely and quite an inspiring write, Gentle Spirit! Corinne |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna Indeed it is, unequivocally! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Donna what a write..well done..although i suspect that they are not ALL like you..how could they be...you are way too unique to have anybody as good as you...especially at poetry...and your new picture is beautiful..enjoyed this..thank you.. Goldenrose. Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt) |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you are lovely....wrapped in golden hues... stunning Donna emotion and word... hugsss you and  I came from the mountain |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Read this a few days ago and didn't have time to reply (life is so busy these days and I love it that way...) But I wanted you to know how beautiful this is...and how much I enjoy reading you. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
JL, thank you and hugs.Corinne, I am glad you found it inspiring. Thank you. I really want to care, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie, thank you, I know you know how much I appreciate you hon. Phillip, you are to kind. Each person, is unique in their own way. I am glad you enjoyed. I really want to care, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness! This poem has been in constant full view since you posted it because it is constantly being read! ~ and I had thought that I had been one of the readers! I came in for a "second" read, only to discover that this is my "first" read! I almost missed this gem from your pen! An outstanding, mature, wise, and soul-touching write, my poetess friend! This was absolutely ~ you! Dear Gentle-Spirited One! Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady L~ you are grace and beauty all wrapped up in one damn beautiful person.... sis of my heart.Susan, that is so kind of you to come back and reply. I appreciate you and your poetry and you already know I am a big fan of yours. It is good to know you are enjoying life hon! Big ole hugs to you.! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Linda, thank you for your gift of friendship, and I am so glad you enjoyed it and didn't miss it. Hugs Earthly one. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Donna? see? I knew it needed nothing but you. Oh, I know her so very well, too kinda like the sqeaky rusted tinge of hamster caged wheel turning, tumbling - little feet grabbing the darkness, hindsight blinded by the light sleeping, sleeping, curled into a ball infantile in its slumber resting for the dusk and fall of dark . . . *tipping my hat to you* and smiling . . . |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Suzie? And I know, how she would fall into a night of darkness, one that would not make her grip tightly its edges with fear or cause her to shed a single tear but would surround her in shimmering swirls of peace and allow the demons to be released.. I know her... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
She smiles at me through my own eyes, bearing the burden of womanhood while simultaneously attempting to stifle the laughter of child. I know her well. She is soulink. Scrawled upon hearts. Regurgitated at dawn, digested by nightfall, recycling herself every single second of eternity. -------------------------------------- Your welcome. Love you too, Donna |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
wow, amazing touching....you blew the roof off with this...beautiful! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Suzie.....I am just grinnin ear to ear and whispering those words that the winds might carry them right back to you. Luv ya too sweetie. Dawn, God I have missed your poetry dear.... I hope we will see something soon and thanks for stopping in... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh I'm glad I didn't miss this one! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
this deserves a standing ovation *applauding heartily* this...lady...is just outstanding in depth and perception of heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dixie, I'm pleased to see you again, thank you. JB, you are among these sisters, with enduring strength. Hugs to you sweetie, and thank you for the lovely comment. |
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