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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2005-05-18 11:15 AM

The skies cried today
I searched for your warmth
In the mist

You lied

You weren’t always there
You didn’t forever care
And I slipped on the wet pavement

Waiting for you

You cursed me
When I was too young
To understand your hate was really guilt

As an adult you forsook me
Your failings too apparent
In my eyes

The skies sobbed today
I fell to my knees to pray
For your lack

You died

And I tried to forgive you
I tried to uplift you
But your soul is too heavy

I wept for what you lost
And how it hurt me

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-05-18 11:50 AM

yes Susan, I know these tears and prayers...
I am reminded of these things from the past also as I read this..and I know you understand what I'm saying...

super hugs to you sweetie.

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

2 posted 2005-05-18 12:26 PM

Beautifully written, paints a portrait of a heavy soul in my mind. I will return to read this again.
adagio

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-05-18 12:28 PM

gripping emotions...this was intense Susan, well done!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-05-18 09:20 PM

sorry for your pain

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2005-05-18 09:48 PM

know this~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

6 posted 2005-05-18 11:02 PM

gosh... don't know what to say... that was beautiful Susan

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2005-05-18 11:51 PM

very straighforward and feeling write

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2005-05-19 08:48 AM

Thank you all!

This was just some memories from childhood and how sometimes the ones that are supposed to protect us, fail us.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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