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The Dance of Mimi….
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The Dance of Mimi…. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Dance of Mimi….  Missy Mimosa, Mimi to generated aunts old Olive Arbor and Fernie Vitae… who heard the squeal of gleeed song in Mimi’s first bow of nightfall from the first warm raze of spring’s wondrous sun… as she danced to May’s gale of blowing winds from southerly storms… Ah Mimi! See her, lifting her skirts in twirl of light as the aunts bend over, hovering above the Boys of Burning Bush…. who will not redden with embarrassed flush till some falling of Mimi’s skirts… Oh, let’s do watch Mimi dance, hear some wind sing between her dappling youth filled leaves…her life, [she knows not her short time, some 20 years to show, or so, before a fell of the axe…] all she knows is she is rootbound, prairied, yet she gleams tropical… and she, long limbed, adolescent in lush, nah-nahhs the sighing aunts…knowing she will soon acquire nature’s pink hats of July and August… and will bring about butterflies to flit and woo…perhaps even…hummingbirds to fill their bill… she looks forward to the acknowledgement of her beauty… and all the while, she ignores the Aunties Arbor and Vitae, who shush and hush her lush green disco dance… ah, Ms. Mimi…dance, little lady… let the doughty old aunts break the snow’s fall from your young limbs… and switch well your pretty skirts come every summer’s breeze… Dance, Mimi, Dance… Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely, lively and very lyrical!! So much enjoyed watching Mimi dance!! Hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is a beautiful melody.... and the breeze is blowing here.... makes me wanna dance!! Come, we will dance in the sun, oh sunny one!!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A spring dance to capture the green glory of the month of May. Very well done Karilea. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply adorable write Karilea. Just what I needed to send me off to dreamland. Nighty Night! Hugs, Chrislane Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you see so much in nature's touch...her commune with all that is...this made me feel festive and like a celebration was going on...and I wanted to be a part of it... Like my grand daughter would say..."Are you Happy?" yeah babe, this made the day. Terrific write poetess with nature's voice in her heart |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie "and switch well your pretty skirts come every summer’s breeze…" I've noticed that trees all dance in different ways...I love the way you have choreographed Mimi!  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this alot. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I'd love to watch her dance with you Sunshinygirl. Beautiful Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, a beautiful celebration, like Lee said! The title spoke to me ... my children call me Mimi and of course I am a dancing Mimi! So I felt this lovely piece in a very special way, dear Karilea. Nature speaks to you and you transform the message in music. Love, Margherita |
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