Open Poetry #35 |
I Am Here |
latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I am here Yes, I will hug you If that fits your needs. I can hold you close, And silently share your grief. I don't mind watching over you, as I sit listening to your silence. My pain is as deep as yours, As I have been in that darkest place. So yes, rest your head ~ My shoulders are broad and strong. I can handle horrid details, It sometimes needs to be said out loud. Spill over with black bile, I can sponge it off. Then we can go on together...... But until I see some small sign from you, That I am wanted I stand timidly by your side. I can not read so well, That I can meet your needs. Help me please So I won't walk away. Without you ever knowing.. I was there. with love, marty I wrote this in answer to a poem written in anguish about the sudden death of her son in a car accident. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a beautiful and heartfelt write.. you are filled with compassion, understanding and friendship. Sending heart-hugs your way~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Nancy, I appreciate your reading and your answer. martyjo |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful expressed caring heart Hope |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Hope, thank you for your kind comment. martyjo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
James, thank you for reading and commenting. martyjo |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
You obviously are a wonderful friend, because the love and compassion spill out in these words and on this page. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marty...feeling the compassion in this! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Alyssa,What a nice thing to say. Thank you. Martie, I appreciate your response. Thank you, martyjo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Marty I read this earlier when you posted it. It is so beautiful, just like you. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Dixie, you are posting! I was sure you were reading. Hope you are feeling better. Thanks for replying, YOU ARE LOVED, marty |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this write was beautiful....thank you so much for sharing |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A very heartful and supportive write. believe in what your heart feels... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Lee and Scorpio, It means a lot to me to see you reading anything I have written. Thank you so much for responding, marty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes Marty, I was reading, just not very much I'm glad you're here |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Dixie,same feelings here. We need to know our loved ones are safe. love, marty |
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