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jellybeans
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0 posted 2005-05-10 02:21 PM


deep inside there lives a fear
in relative silence
it does subsist

now and then it knocks
seeking to draw the outside
in, but it has no want

to come out
and join in the company
of doubt and hesitation

their standstill speed shivers
and the lack of faith
checks mustard seeds

at the door

deep inside
there lives a fear

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1 posted 2005-05-10 02:22 PM


their standstill speed shivers
and the lack of faith
checks mustard seeds

at the door

~*~

Oh honey...
this is so sad...
so stark...

hugging you...

jellybeans
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2 posted 2005-05-10 02:33 PM


ah...lady...thank you....sigh...could use a hug today
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3 posted 2005-05-10 02:33 PM


deep inside
there lives a fear


yes dear, I have faced such fear also...
and will hold your hand until you fear no more....

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4 posted 2005-05-10 02:36 PM




We're here
to serve,
ma'am!


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5 posted 2005-05-10 02:41 PM


thank you....love that hug

and yep, I wish I could say I was fearless, but I am human, and I get rid of one only to discover another.....and if I had the faith, I could give them up, but ....well...you know, some of them are hard to let go of
thank you lady

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6 posted 2005-05-11 01:05 PM


and the lack of faith
checks mustard seeds

at the door

But you carry the plant with you, my friend... and in time... it will blossom in brilliant yellow, brightening your life... and providing more than enough seeds.

Meanwhile... hang tough... and know you're not alone.

Excellent!!

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7 posted 2005-05-12 04:55 AM




     we all have fears~
       you have many friends here

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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8 posted 2005-05-12 06:05 PM


  I particularly like this one because it reminds me of me. I too have fears. M any of them I can not even explain, only endure. Let me know how any of us can assist you to endure your fears, please.
adagio :[

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9 posted 2005-05-12 11:41 PM


Never drop the mustard seed, jellybean
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