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Orbiting
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Orbiting I orbit in my paths content Like smoke goes up the flue in vent With observations on the way Of all the awe comes into play Latitude and longitude and Melted hues of white exude With greenery and scenery And sips of wines fine alchemy I float; I fly up in the sky I am a bird a butterfly I chase the wind and sail the sea To touch the spirit of the we And when I pass my hand the mist To feel the dew on hand and wrist I bath it on my flying dove To baptize her once more my love It is a process of repeat Each day I show my love in greet |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I orbit in my paths content Like smoke goes up the flue in vent With observations on the way Of all the awe comes into play Sure does, doesn't it? smiling...this was a wonderful morning read...many thanks for sharing a nice tasting rich cup of coffee this morning!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Sigh! This morning's poetic offering is one of the loveliest of your lovelies! It is perfect in rhythm and sky blues!  Thou hast scribed it well, sire! Love & Living Light, EA    |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Latitude and longitude and Melted hues of white exude With greenery and scenery And sips of wines fine alchemy I float; I fly up in the sky I am a bird a butterfly I chase the wind and sail the sea To touch the spirit of the we --------------------------------- Well Ive no doubt those will be the coolest verses I read all day  Your rhymes are the written on the stars me sweet Sy-guy... your cadence-their twinkle. *winkiewinkie*     |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And when I pass my hand the mist To feel the dew on hand and wrist I bath it on my flying dove To baptize her once more my love It is a process of repeat Each day I show my love in greet ~*~ Y'know, it's just probably me, but I sense a bit of orneriness in this little baptism...  Good morning, Smiling Sy!    |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A great way to start my day Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Sure does, doesn't it. Good morning sweet. Earth Angel But I didn't get quite high enough to see you. JM I hope all is well, three days without a word is a life time. Whats happening? WW Sunshine I love sweet and sour cabbage. scorpio Your comments are a great way to start my day. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful language! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Thank you my friend. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is soooo sweet Sey. Very well done, my master of rhyme! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, Thank you dear. |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
You sir, are a mad silver-tongued angel. Descended from the heavens to give the mortals pause! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
~K~ Thank you so much for the read and reply. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah yes...your love truly soars from your heart to your pen leaving us to feast upon the magic you kindle with words...A trip filled with joy you have taken us on....Magnificent...*hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 You are the kindest of kind. |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
I loved this one ; once again you have made me think of the way I feel about my lady love whose name is still Leah, but here I go talking about myself again too much. This reply is supposed to be about your work, but it makes me think and feel about my own feelings, which is what it is supposed to do. adagio |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
adagio If a poem can do that it is a success. |
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