Open Poetry #35 |
sequence 34 street light grid |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ass faults the asphalt like ping pong balls do a dodgeball game with red lights on a wet sock morning over highway one o' one before two and I was there again just as a coffee man in an old shoes sky with too much time for the barefoot dreams that got lost in the room with too many windows that needed cleaning before the sun can come but she is always late and anyway my metal has always been at her neon before the electic became her default turn on ______________ dark (scribblenote: it is all between the lines this time) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It is, what it is...isn't it..? Hugs funny, human nature? smiles to ya, for a wonderful day... you are indeed an artist of God's making... Wonderfully written |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
your images and visions make me smile buddie... good morning big guy! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and I was there again just as a coffee man in an old shoes sky with too much time for the barefoot dreams that got lost in the room with too many windows ~*~ Oh, what you see in those early hours... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
smiling at you this morning D - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Just "old shoe sky" made this poem worth reading, but the whole between the lines poem, wonderful, as always! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Dear D- Pretty soon you'll have no need for mortal conversations... your thoughts will channel directly into the universe, absorbed through the skin in a slow push fix. Those who take off all their clothes will get the maximum exposure. *weg* Indigo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
well then god turn me into an apostrophe so i could be squeezed in somewhere between your lines |
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