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Beki
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0 posted 2005-05-03 04:43 AM



Whispers of jasmine
waft through my window,
lull me to dream
of faraway mountains
and your hand on my cheek.

© Copyright 2005 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2005-05-03 06:05 AM


Simply beautiful...tender and light...

Goldenrose.

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LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-05-03 06:52 AM


ok, now you've done it, I wanna take a nap, smell the jasmen, feel the hand on my cheek, that comfy morning wake, with smiles and hugs.  Good one Beck
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-05-03 08:07 PM


Enjoyed...James
Beki
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4 posted 2005-05-05 12:18 PM


thank you so much for reading my friends, I do appreciate it
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Beneath the northern stars
5 posted 2005-05-05 01:48 PM


What a sweet dream.

~sky

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adagio
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6 posted 2005-05-05 03:44 PM


"Whispers of jasmine" A wonderfull image,One of my favorites!

Beki
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7 posted 2005-05-06 12:05 PM


thanks a bunch my friends  delighted it was real for you!
passing shadows
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8 posted 2005-05-06 07:22 PM


dang Beki, this is awesome!
SmartChick
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9 posted 2005-05-06 07:43 PM


Just beautiful.
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10 posted 2005-05-10 07:29 PM


Absolutely lovely writing Beki!  This is so soft, and tender.
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11 posted 2005-05-10 11:08 PM


Beautiful !! Hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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