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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2005-05-05 01:20 PM

Are you there?
You with God on your face?
That mile high music
Declaring nature’s username?

Your long distance speaking
Learns to sweeten my imaginings
Like a child’s “Please Touch Museum”
A self chosen let go question
Inspiring suzerain

Hey there, you with power speed
Pouring forth, plowmen of dreams
Turning away ghosts of trepidation
Center of practice, doodling mountains

Hey there, eye for dance’s sake
Singing like your heart would break
Playing the cards of something missing
Holding me between aspiring fingers
Throwing down a hidden ace

Hey there, you with God on your face
Traveling to chauvinistic places
Adorning any rust ridden circlet
Subsistant in your de-ja-vu figurine
Time sharing a passionate heart beat

Hey there, you with a web of magic
Be interwoven with my soul?
Keeping balance capable
You make music dance
Pounding in some lost blended madness

Hey there brave heart
Time is the author’s conclusion
Did it move you by definition?
You were one of the…
happiest moments of my life
and the best part of the day!

Are you there?

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2005-05-05 01:30 PM

LeeJ

"You were one of the…
happiest moments of my life
and the best part of the day!"

Loved this poem!!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-05-05 01:34 PM

nicely done Lee
much enjoyed
especially the ending

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2005-05-05 01:39 PM

hmmmmmmmmmm dayyyym ms lee j...
you are dancing with fred astaire
in this view..
enjoyed it lady

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2005-05-05 02:25 PM

is he there?
look up, you'll know

liked your spunk in this ......whether he's there or not, you are

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

5 posted 2005-05-05 03:58 PM

...And here am I taking it all in ,slowly, but carefully. Enjoyed.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-05-06 11:53 PM

Nice...James

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2005-05-07 08:02 AM

ive missed your thoughts
and touch~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2005-05-07 08:06 AM

LeeJ
Where did you put your three D glasses?
Good morning sweet, enjoyed.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2005-05-07 08:10 AM

And you...make me smile.

Libraried this

I did...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2005-05-08 08:50 PM

A classic Lee J, for sure.
Enjoyed the mood, the words, and the song.

JL

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

11 posted 2005-05-09 12:31 PM

"Your long distance speaking
Learns to sweeten my imaginings",
my dear, and I, in turn,
am learning much from you,
teacher of phraseology,
and master of imagery.

One of my favorites from you.

Keep it up, poetess,
You rock me!

Love ya
Liz

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