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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In my bluest haven where I have a found a home never more to wander never more to roam come and sit with me, my friends, lend to me your words, and spin me a song in literary form take me to where my heart is warm in my bluest haven a close, safe room of content 'tis poetry I'm craving and where poetic form is bent so welcome me with open arms lend to me your poetic charms 'tis so very good to come back home where our minds are free to roam so come by fireside, sit, and cheer me with words, erase my fear and extend to me a wordy release and catch me as I fall to my ease... For this is home to me... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a home away from home, kinda like a warm comfortable cabin by the lake, during a mild winter, in front of a fireplace with a delightful book. Ohhhh I do so love your descriptive ventures....thanks to you, and to Ron and the admins for a welcoming mini vacation |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yes, yes... home.... such a nice word isn't it mum? I love the beauty of this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And this blue haven is exactly how I feel about PiP. Well said sweet lady. Hugs to my hip-sis. Life is one great big canvas; |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
With rapturous thoughts you've gathered in Some colored threads and shortened twigs With joyfilled hands, you've woven a home that echoes manyfold the love you've given. We gather in clutches as chicks to hen Revering your expressions of thought and love Rejoice you may for the strength of this home For this structure reflects all who lend a hand. Well done, Sunshine. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I couldn't have said it any better  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was especially nice today.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sunshine, Such a nice welcoming to enter your poetic home! A pleasure to read your writing again. miscee (p.s. I can hardly wait to read your book! I wonder if you are finished with the sequel.) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Lovely write Karilea....and so true. ChrislanePoetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi Karilea I love the feeling of this....a haven is a wonderful place to be.... I don’t mind spending everyday |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Karilea, I will always welcome you with open arms. I like to think of you as one of my dearest friends. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice...James |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
You'll see a smilin' face, a fireplace, a cozy room Little nest that nestles where the roses bloom Just Sunshine and me, and Poets write free... We're happy in your, blue, haven...  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...My mother and father in love called their house, "my blue heaven". Your poem has a special meaning to me for that reason, and also because we are family...I want to sit with you and them and they and link hands and talk poetry.  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It takes a lot of love and some very special people to make a house a home, and you are all that, Karilea~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Who needs a fireside when we have Sunshine's welcoming warmth? *S* This is lovely... and more so because I know the sincerity of it. *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I just needed to visit the comforts of home again mom.... hugs you........ |
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