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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-05-03 07:32 AM


Rewrite

Silence

She was my church
My spire my shrine
And God took back
What I thought as mine

Each night I beat
Upon deaths door
The beats respond
But nothing more

My fleur-de-lis
My joie-de-vivre
My goal my soul
The heart of me

I call her name
It sounds the same
But only silence
Returns reclaim

Hollow echoes
Shout encore
My knocks upon
The astral door

I sail upon
A sea of grays
Inconsolable
Counting days


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scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
1 posted 2005-05-03 08:39 AM


A heart's sorrow in this write Sy.  Very powerful.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-05-03 09:05 AM


Such a sad write dear Sy.
I do hope all is okay in the sunny southland.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-05-03 09:24 AM



This one left me
with chills, Sy...


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2005-05-03 09:26 AM


Hollow echoes
Shout encore
My knocks upon
The astral door

I sail upon
A sea of grays
Inconsolable
Counting days


wanton and desire....expressed with much compassion...

Enjoyed sy, and good morning

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2005-05-03 09:33 AM


scorpio
Thank you my friend.

Nancy,
All is well.

Sunshine
Me too.

LeeJ
Good morning sweet, not to worry.

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