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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-03 07:13 AM

there is always the mistress
that waits in her shadows
to press to my leather
and undulate my need
down her secreting highway

I see her now at the doorway
her eyes are the adder's amber
her suggestions ride the winds
insatiable with vulgar whispers
that only a sinner savors

she claimed me before
the sighs of skin knew me
when the wet womb moaned
and I heard thunder
through the walls of pain

and now she waits again
for her dawnless tribute
for the feel of leather
on her metal sides
and for the weight of my male

clutched in her vibrations

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dark

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-05-03 10:03 AM

Powerful - you write her so well - the ride- wish I could feel the wind -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-05-03 10:06 AM

Never before have I read a poem on nature's awe, expressing the way only you could do...amazingly beautiful...

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

3 posted 2005-05-03 11:44 AM

I know you're talking about your 'cycle, but I sure do like to think about bitch slappin' her every now and then just to feel that leather on my sides... *weg*

Indigo

[This message has been edited by Indigo (05-03-2005 12:44 PM).]

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

4 posted 2005-05-03 01:11 PM

LMAO
what Indigo said...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-05-03 01:27 PM

cool write

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2005-05-03 01:28 PM

"insatiable with vulgar whispers
that only a sinner savors"

you sure it's just sinners? not that I would know either...just askin'.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2005-05-03 02:32 PM

thanks to you all ladies

and also laughin at what indi said

bring it on indi...hope them nails are
under warrenty...grin

susie C...just sinners I hear...read it somewhere...am too innocent to know from experience ya know..

you all are a blessing, thanks again

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2005-05-03 10:39 PM

oh yea!!

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2005-05-04 09:20 PM

You stir a breathless, restless wind, DS~
Without compromising it, and I envy you for it.

Gotta love the not so subtle breeze, it just feels right by me.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2005-05-05 07:38 AM

msg..thanks babe for the eyes..

_________

lori, thanks for sharing the wind moment
hope I can always stir some grins from you
that you always will wanna ...smile

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