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Rick
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Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2005-05-05 07:34 AM


Where I go I’m followed, by what I do not know
But something seems to keep me safe no matter where I go
Could it be there’s spirits, of whom I’m still to meet?
Some guardians who nurture souls and offer them retreat?

Might they be God angels that he sent with all his love?
Keepers of the many souls who’ll join him up above
Or are they just our voices of company from birth?
Sharing every moment’s mood and time we spend on earth

I hear their conversations in my head each time I write?
Do they rest in quiet dream, when time of sleep at night?
To waken me with gentle nudge unto another day
To follow me but also guide me to a better way

I am not alone in life, there’s more than one can see
Not people made of flesh and bone, but voices that are free
That offer peace to calm me, and settles what is wrong
Their conversations telling me of ways that I belong

What and who my keepers are, I’m pleased they chose to share
Every moment of my life that travels here and there
For they have given comfort and their conversation’s been
Fulfilling and respected more than earthly things I’ve seen


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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-05-05 07:37 AM


I loved the title and the complete package, I love reading your poetry...great to see you posting again my friend!

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

Rick
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Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
2 posted 2005-05-05 07:40 AM


ARH, nice to see you here again, it has been a while, but words have come back,  hope you have been well, thank you so much for your reply, much appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-05-05 08:19 AM


Hi Rick, morning...thank you for an awesome read

Could it be there’s spirits, of whom I’m still to meet?
Some guardians who nurture souls and offer them retreat?

Wull Heck yeah!!!!  
Might they be God angels that he sent with all his love?
Keepers of the many souls who’ll join him up above
Or are they just our voices of company from birth?
Sharing every moment’s mood and time we spend on earth


people souls whom we knew before we were born?  could be?    this reminds me so much of the song, I believe

I hear their conversations in my head each time I write?
Do they rest in quiet dream, when time of sleep at night?
To waken me with gentle nudge unto another day
To follow me but also guide me to a better way


hehe, the muses or perhaps the Gods?

I am not alone in life, there’s more than one can see
Not people made of flesh and bone, but voices that are free
That offer peace to calm me, and settles what is wrong
Their conversations telling me of ways that I belong
Yeah!!!!

What and who my keepers are, I’m pleased they chose to share
Every moment of my life that travels here and there
For they have given comfort and their conversation’s been
Fulfilling and respected more than earthly things I’ve seen


Your so greatful to life, and you can stop to listen, hear it talking and sharing it's wealth

A wonder this morning's poem of yours...brings happiness and comfort...

Hugs


Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2005-05-05 08:25 AM


Dear Lee, you're an awesome replier, thank you so much for this one, it was grand and so very much appreciated my friend, have a great day and be your best.

Sincerely
Rick

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2005-05-05 08:25 AM


I saved this faster than you can say, "Rick"! Angel 3

IWIHWT (I wish I had written that!)

Beautifully and divinely expressed, my friend! I loved it! Absolutely loved it! I know whereof you so eloquently wrote!

Love & Angel Light,
Linda

Rick
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Victoria, Australia
6 posted 2005-05-05 08:29 AM


Dear Linda, your great, it is wonderful to share these words and have them read, thank you so much for your reply, be well and take care till next time.

Sincerely
Rick

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