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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-04-27 02:38 PM



Everything moves.

Though my fingers yearn for a
stilled response.

As my world turns swift
around you.


© Copyright 2005 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-04-27 02:41 PM


the need to be still yes

nice write

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-04-27 02:57 PM


There are moments
when we want time
to stand still.

Well done Eric!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-04-27 03:11 PM


well done *clapping*

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-04-27 03:17 PM


you say so much
so beautifully
with so few words Eric.

Well done....

miscellanea
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OH
5 posted 2005-04-27 03:50 PM


Eric,
  I know the feeling.  You write it so well in so few words.  
                    miscellanea

DavePage
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6 posted 2005-04-27 05:29 PM



Brilliant words Eric

Added a line, hope you dont mind

In your ideas I moved

Though my fingers yearn for a
stilled response.

Everything moves.

As my world turns swift
around you.



garysgirl
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7 posted 2005-04-27 05:41 PM


My goodness, Eric. I just am amazed every
time I read you. I can feel your poetry. LOL
Hugs,
Ethel

Ericc
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8 posted 2005-04-27 05:53 PM


Thanks everyone!

Dave...your words are always appreciated and a great addition. Thanks!

Eric

Margherita
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Eternity
9 posted 2005-04-28 08:39 AM


In this movement

you produce light

and each single particle

holds absolute beauty

and a still ocean of love

where the yearning

is soothed.


*

This is wonderfully inspired and inspiring, dear Eric!
I love you,
Margherita


LeeJ
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10 posted 2005-04-28 08:45 AM


this was pure adoration with class....


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In Your Poetic Mind
11 posted 2005-04-28 08:59 AM


Ericc..

you have a materful touch for passion and romance....how subtle but noticed the desire is....

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2005-04-29 08:42 PM


What wonder in the art of touch.
TD

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with you
13 posted 2005-04-30 12:45 PM


another beauty from you
Laoha
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14 posted 2005-04-30 01:42 AM


precisely!

LAOHA'S PEN


BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
15 posted 2005-05-04 09:44 PM


As always, your words are right on the mark and so deliciously swift!
A Romantic Heart
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16 posted 2005-05-05 07:21 AM


Your whispers are gentle but loud...

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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