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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2005-04-27 02:38 PM

Everything moves.

Though my fingers yearn for a
stilled response.

As my world turns swift
around you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-04-27 02:41 PM

the need to be still

yes

nice write

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-04-27 02:57 PM

There are moments
when we want time
to stand still.

Well done Eric!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-04-27 03:11 PM

well done *clapping*

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-04-27 03:17 PM

you say so much
so beautifully
with so few words Eric.

Well done....

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2005-04-27 03:50 PM

Eric,
I know the feeling. You write it so well in so few words.
miscellanea

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2005-04-27 05:29 PM

Brilliant words Eric

Added a line, hope you dont mind

In your ideas I moved

Though my fingers yearn for a
stilled response.

Everything moves.

As my world turns swift
around you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2005-04-27 05:41 PM

My goodness, Eric. I just am amazed every
time I read you. I can feel your poetry. LOL
Hugs,
Ethel

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2005-04-27 05:53 PM

Thanks everyone!

Dave...your words are always appreciated and a great addition. Thanks!

Eric

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2005-04-28 08:39 AM

In this movement

you produce light

and each single particle

holds absolute beauty

and a still ocean of love

where the yearning

is soothed.

*

This is wonderfully inspired and inspiring, dear Eric!
I love you,
Margherita

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2005-04-28 08:45 AM

this was pure adoration with class....

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2005-04-28 08:59 AM

Ericc..

you have a materful touch for passion and romance....how subtle but noticed the desire is....

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2005-04-29 08:42 PM

What wonder in the art of touch.
TD

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

13 posted 2005-04-30 12:45 PM

another beauty from you

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

14 posted 2005-04-30 01:42 AM

precisely!

LAOHA'S PEN

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

15 posted 2005-05-04 09:44 PM

As always, your words are right on the mark and so deliciously swift!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

16 posted 2005-05-05 07:21 AM

Your whispers are gentle but loud...

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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