Open Poetry #35 |
When words won't escape. |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Awkward the feeling when words won’t escape To say what you’re feeling and share A killer the quiet of years that just grew Which plasters the sign of despair Void of the feelings of care of once there Too often the company gone Solidarity passed by the wayside years back Now trying our best to belong Frightened of thinking what future will hold When bond of a habit does part But sometimes the bruises and breaks do not heal So where will another day start? Time will see changes that we cannot change Things in our heart bare that fact Each day we’re more distant and further apart Unsure when to speak or react |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh Rick, this surely brought back memories...of which I would never want to see anyone experience, and when this occurs, it all seems so surreal, so unfair, and yet, the thoughts always kept reminding me, that in the long run, we'd both be better off... Hugs dear Friend...for a very heartwarming write... Happy Monday |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Lee, thoughts coming onto paper, could be a relationship anywhere, when communications is none existent, there is too much time to think. Thank you for your reply my friend, I had a good Monday, about to get into bed for the night, another day tomorrow. So you have a great day. Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick Reminds me of something I once wrote. I sail upon A sea of grays Inconsolable Counting days |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Seymour, a wonderful and verse and very well said. Have a nice day my friend and take care. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Rick, this is so sad, you've expressed this so well. It really hits home and tugs at the heart strings. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Dixie, nice to see you here my friend, thank you for your reply again, hope you have a great day, see you soon. Sincerely Rick |
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