Open Poetry #35 |
Chances in Dreams |
MyHeartofShadows Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 88Hyattsville, MD |
What cost for me would be to pay, To be beside you once agin, To spend the night to make the day, To dream of you and me once more. My life savings is but to spend, And I would be happy to pay If our brief time never did end, Yet I know you have gone away. There you are in the meadow green, I dream of you and me once more. Your voice carries on the morning mist, I dream of you and me once more. My feet go down paths we've been, My mind says no, but my heart insists. ~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Just wanted to say thanks for posting to one of my poems and to visit for a moment. I like your poem and the thoughts of dreaming. After reading it, I want to day dream, instead of begin the day's activities! Have a good day, My Heart of Shadows. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautiful writing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes dreams are all we have and that's okay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyHeartofShadows~ Your poetic heart casts lovely shadows~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is truly lovely!! Hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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MyHeartofShadows Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 88Hyattsville, MD |
You are all so very kind to take the time and read and respond and lighten my day. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing~~~ from a former Marylander (well my family is all still there and I am but a stone's throw north M |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Just happened to be in the neighborhood and thought I'd drop in. The title was a real drawing card. This is so beautifully expressed. I hope your dreams come true someday, My Heart of Shadows. One never knows, huh? miscellanea |
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