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MyHeartofShadows
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0 posted 2005-05-02 07:23 AM


What cost for me would be to pay,
To be beside you once agin,
To spend the night to make the day,
To dream of you and me once more.
My life savings is but to spend,
And I would be happy to pay
If our brief time never did end,
Yet I know you have gone away.

There you are in the meadow green,
I dream of you and me once more.
Your voice carries on the morning mist,
I dream of you and me once more.
My feet go down paths we've been,
My mind says no, but my heart insists.

~


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miscellanea
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1 posted 2005-05-02 08:49 AM


Just wanted to say thanks for posting to one of my poems and to visit for a moment.  I like your poem and the thoughts of dreaming.  After reading it, I want to day dream, instead of begin the day's activities!   Have a good day, My Heart of Shadows.


LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-05-02 09:39 AM


Beautiful writing
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-05-02 05:01 PM


sometimes dreams are all we have

and that's okay

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-05-02 05:12 PM


Nice...James
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5 posted 2005-05-02 09:11 PM


MyHeartofShadows~

Your poetic heart casts lovely shadows~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Enchantress
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6 posted 2005-05-02 09:44 PM


This is truly lovely!!
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

MyHeartofShadows
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7 posted 2005-05-03 02:10 PM


You are all so very kind to take the time and read and respond and lighten my day.
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2005-05-03 05:41 PM


lovely writing~~~ from a former Marylander
(well my family is all still there and I am but a stone's throw north

M

miscellanea
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9 posted 2005-08-18 12:57 PM


Just happened to be in the neighborhood and thought I'd drop in.  The title was a real drawing card.  This is so beautifully expressed.  I hope your dreams come true someday, My Heart of Shadows.  One never knows, huh?

  miscellanea

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