Open Poetry #35 |
The Reef |
longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Coral Reef/Drum I lie here in the Shallows…. Just beyond the reef A place of Awe and Wonder…. A place beyond belief I’ll try to paint a picture, of what you would observe But some things are quite difficult to paint with only words It’s a place where fish like Butterflies are moving with the tide Place of microcosms and the Coral where they hide Reef itself is painted by some unseen artists hand Vibrant… Bursting full of life….. Never seen on land Glowing in the sunset, the polyps now emerge Do all kinds of polyp things before they then disperse As the darkness settles in, the fish begin to move Some in quiet and solitude,,,, Others are in schools Squid are darting everywhere… Jetting to and fro Moving restlessly about……Hunting as they go Colours, endless colours, as the fish show off their wares Some are showing pleasure…. Others feeding here Lobster’s in the open…. He must be feeling brave Normally all you can see, is feelers in a cave Now and the a grouper ambles through the night Ignoring everything, as though he has the right So now you have a picture of the beauty of the reef It’s time for us to now discuss, a paltry thing like me You wouldn’t call me Predator…. That I’ll never be I am just a product of man’s insanity A rusting drum of Toxic Waste,,, dumped by those on shore When I burst,,,, ………You’ll Never see ……………..the Reef Alive once more . . Multinational Company fined $15,500 for dumping Barrels of Organo-phosphates It cost more than that to recover the Drums Live It |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The reef sounds magnificent, as does the picture you have painted waft a scent and a touch. To destroy such wonder is unthinkable...and yet, we do. TD |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes Full power to your words and excellent they are Dave |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Thankyou both for you comments Just a bit sad what we are doing When will we learn? peter Live It |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful scene here and yes, it's sad people never learn |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...I've dived a few reefs...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Well delivered message...enjoyed, yet, saddened by the wickedness of man's doing...when we could so have utilized clean technology? When decissions are made over money...most times, the rich get richer and the rest of us suffer... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A saga of a beauty and the beast... Well done, longte -----------ice ><> |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A beautiful write. The ever meaningless ending of such beauty is perverse. I hope your writings are published in needed places. Best to you, martyjo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LongTe~ You've nailed it ! Now if they could just nail more of those perpetrators ... maybe .... just maybe ... those beautiful coral reefs will be there for our next generation to see~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))>< Email [email protected] |
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