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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2005-06-12 06:05 AM

flip of tail
acknowledgment...
in gesture of
"I know you're here"
and yes
it was 'enough' for now
acceptance in his
silent stay... and
with a gentle
kiss of breeze
upon a
weary brow

refreshed

a lonely heart
found comfort in the
quiet share of
night

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-06-12 07:36 AM

nice

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2005-06-12 10:39 AM

it was 'enough' for now
acceptance in his
silent stay

You know this could be a love, or many things, I liked this a lot Vicky. I chose to think it was the moon.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-06-12 11:26 AM

vlraynes
A soft alright, enjoyed.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2005-06-12 12:22 PM

Flip of a tail, or perhaps a weathered
quill so filed with that which nourishes
us all....thanx Vicky...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2005-06-12 10:13 PM

a bittersweet beauty here poetess Vicky...
quite a moment to behold...
and ya know Im loving the allits.

So good to see your muse returned.

Dont give up on me ... I'm about to come alive ...

Train

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-06-15 12:47 PM

Enjoyed...James

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2005-06-15 06:11 AM

smilin at you Vicky, a beautimous write m'dear.

mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2005-06-15 07:17 AM

Vicky, this was beautiful, calming, peaceful...thank you!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2005-06-16 08:05 AM

this read spiritual to me , it is beauty, Vic

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2005-06-16 01:41 PM

Vicky, this poem sings. It is lovely.

.....jo

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

11 posted 2005-06-16 01:43 PM

The words and feel of this poem touch the inner heart....Wonderful writing...*big hugs*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2005-06-16 01:48 PM

Now me?
I see a nightengale...

it was that "flip"...

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

13 posted 2005-06-16 10:58 PM

Very nice, Vicky!

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

14 posted 2005-08-28 04:48 PM

I remember "silent stays" from friends....sometimes just hearing their breath on the other end of the reciever, or seeing their name on the msgr box...knowing they are there...its an amazing comfort...

enjoyed

hugs, g

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