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Rick
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0 posted 2005-05-01 08:18 AM


Love is a feeling of lust and respect
That we should all nurture and try to protect
For if it should wander away and be lost
Many would suffer an ultimate cost

Love offers more than the days that we live
Providing a calmness and way to forgive
Love holds more strength than a body could match
Yet fragile and weak if its core you would scratch

Love is forgiving, respectful and more
Religion to some as they come to adore
Love is a blessing that comes from above
So everyone’s searching and praying for love

[This message has been edited by Rick (05-02-2005 07:55 AM).]

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EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2005-05-01 08:26 AM


Oh how right you are Rick. We are all searching for love. This is a wonderful poem. Sincere and heartfelt and I am so glad I got a chance to read it and comment on it this morning.
Rick
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2 posted 2005-05-01 08:55 AM


EvocativeVerse2, thank you so much for your reply, love is something we all seek, thank god for some day. Be well and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-05-01 09:22 AM


Excellent write Rick.
Indeed love is all these things..
and we are searching.
Well done.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Martie
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4 posted 2005-05-01 09:49 AM


Rick

This is beautiful!!

Margherita
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5 posted 2005-05-01 11:32 AM


May we all awaken to LOVE.

Beautifully said.

Love, Margherita

Rick
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6 posted 2005-05-02 07:59 AM


Dear Nancy, thank you for your reply, we all search and one day will surely find.

Martie, great to see you here, thank you for your comment, appreciated.

Margherita, to wake to love would be wonderful, luckily a lifetime is quite a while. Thank you for your reply.

To you all my friends, again thank you and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

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