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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-03-20 12:27 PM

I Am/You Are

I am
yin
to your yang…

the breath
in your bubble…

You are
because
to my why…

the reflection
in my eyes…

I am
tender curled fingers
in your hand…

You are
solid beating
of my heart…

You are
joy's ring
in my bell…

silver light
in my eyes…

I am
a dream
in your slumber…

light's beacon
on your shore…

You are
swift dare in
my dreams…

low lilt
in my voice…

I am
warmth
in your arms…

You are
why I know
there is a God…

and the reason
for angels…

source of
my pride…

bosom's swell
of my heart…

I am
a horizon to
your journey…

your partner in
life's dance…

summer rain to
your parched lips…

You are
the beam
in my moon…

I do not want to be,
without You

You want I,
to make two,
one

I am
yin
to your yang…

You are
the because
to my why…

you are
an ear
to my whisper...

~*~

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
26 June 2000
revised 20 August 2002

Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

1 posted 2005-03-20 12:32 PM

I was going to do that this morning..*s
( You Are)
~A~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-03-20 01:00 PM

Very nice indeed!
Enjoyed this one Karilea.
Hugs~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-03-20 04:48 PM

You are
why I know
there is a God…

and the reason
for angels…

gorgeous!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-03-20 05:36 PM

So many lines to choose from, but I do believe that these are my favourite ~

"you are
an ear
to my whisper..."

Linda

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2005-03-20 05:53 PM

Karilea/sissie

I love this....the way one compliments the other! Thanks for reposting.

Laoha
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since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

6 posted 2005-03-21 05:04 AM

As Laozi said,

"These Two are out of One,
though differently named,
they both can be described as Mystery."

"The Mystery and the Mysteriousness of it
is the doorway to all the wonders."

China Poet
LAOHA'S PEN

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2005-03-21 06:08 AM

beautiful Kari

and yes I'm still alive!

mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2005-03-21 08:42 AM

You are
why I know
there is a God…

Beautiful! ~K, and I see that I am not alone in picking up on this line.....~P

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2005-03-22 04:00 AM

And it's the line I would have chosen, too... for finding the right one is knowing why you exist in this world... knowing that there is purpose and not just random motion until we drop from exhaustion. *S*

Absolutely beautiful!!

saved_by_grace
Member

since 2005-01-08

Posts 332
In the arms of God...

10 posted 2005-03-22 11:07 AM

WOW... I don't think I would be able to come up with anything original as far as comments go...this was truly AMAZING, Sunshine, a real keeper!!! Loved every word!

God bless,

Becka

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2005-03-22 11:09 AM

coulda swore I answered this when I first read it..
shaking my head here*
glad it came back so I could savor it again
and remember to click.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2005-03-22 11:10 AM

You are
the because
to my why…

you are
an ear
to my whisper...''''
lovely Karilea....

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

13 posted 2005-04-29 10:50 PM

Beautiful simply beautiful.
Enjoyed this piece.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Laoha
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since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

14 posted 2005-04-30 01:45 AM

read one more time, and feel it some more

LAOHA'S PEN

PouringJewels
Member

since 2003-09-18

Posts 158
Maryland

15 posted 2005-04-30 02:07 AM

"You are the warmth in my arms." Well done.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

16 posted 2005-04-30 03:55 AM

beautiful

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

17 posted 2005-04-30 05:19 AM

"You are
because
to my why…"

If you had written simply this, it would have been a good poem, but the rest makes it a great one....

enjoyed
---------ice
><>

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

18 posted 2005-04-30 10:25 AM

glad this came up again

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

19 posted 2005-05-02 02:41 AM

This I like, you take chances..

You rock.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

20 posted 2005-05-02 08:27 AM

I'm poetically moved by your words, this was very pretty Kari...Good Morning...how are you doing? Happy Monday

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