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soul drifter
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0 posted 2005-04-29 08:11 PM


Redhead In Blue

There is nothing as elegant, or like a daffodil, softly beautiful
as a smiling redhead in blue
you know it's true
the way a strawberry curl girl can make you feel warmth in your soul

There is nothing quite like this sweet girl in my arms
a burning ember redhead in blue
yeah, she's the one who
makes the sun shine inside my heart with her charms

She dangles carrots
and I'm strung out on her love
oh, sweet memory of you
when you blessed rain clouds above
into skies of brilliant blue

I was nothing at all till she picked me out of the litter
of all the guys making with their puppy dog eyes
I was so suprised
the way that maple leaf girl pulled me close to her

She cuddles with me
I'm a puppy for her love
sweetly I ask of you
take me and show me the wonder of
my redhead in blue

You'll see my redhead out in a blue sexy blouse
but I'll see her tiptoe naked around the house
I can't help but smile for her
I can't help but fall limp in her arms in quiet wonder
it's you
my redhead in blue

There was something in the way she rescued me
and promised to never leave
some days I can hardly believe
that this angelic being is watching over me

She bathes me in light
bright like the springtime sun
oh the sweet aroma of you
when I'm exploring your soft skin like porcelain
my redhead in blue

There is nothing in this world quite like her
my firey redhead in blue
I know it's true
sure as the adorable way her smile begins to curl
knowing it's for me
and I couldn't be more happy

I hope you all find your own redhead in blue someday

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

© Copyright 2005 Zach Hilgefort - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-04-29 08:13 PM


love this! you can't tell from my picture but I'm a redhead...with a little blonde.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-04-30 01:46 AM


Nice....James
PouringJewels
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3 posted 2005-04-30 01:59 AM


Got to love us redheads. I was blessed to have born two beautiful ruby jewels of my own. Nice write.
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4 posted 2005-04-30 08:46 AM


Zach~
This is just a beautifully word-song of the heart~
I'd say she's fortunate to have you too~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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WindWalker
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5 posted 2005-05-02 10:53 AM


This is beautiful, well crafted too! I like it!
Enchantress
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6 posted 2005-05-02 11:36 AM


Beautiful Zach...
Your imagery brought her to life...well done.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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