Open Poetry #35 |
Redhead In Blue |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Redhead In Blue There is nothing as elegant, or like a daffodil, softly beautiful as a smiling redhead in blue you know it's true the way a strawberry curl girl can make you feel warmth in your soul There is nothing quite like this sweet girl in my arms a burning ember redhead in blue yeah, she's the one who makes the sun shine inside my heart with her charms She dangles carrots and I'm strung out on her love oh, sweet memory of you when you blessed rain clouds above into skies of brilliant blue I was nothing at all till she picked me out of the litter of all the guys making with their puppy dog eyes I was so suprised the way that maple leaf girl pulled me close to her She cuddles with me I'm a puppy for her love sweetly I ask of you take me and show me the wonder of my redhead in blue You'll see my redhead out in a blue sexy blouse but I'll see her tiptoe naked around the house I can't help but smile for her I can't help but fall limp in her arms in quiet wonder it's you my redhead in blue There was something in the way she rescued me and promised to never leave some days I can hardly believe that this angelic being is watching over me She bathes me in light bright like the springtime sun oh the sweet aroma of you when I'm exploring your soft skin like porcelain my redhead in blue There is nothing in this world quite like her my firey redhead in blue I know it's true sure as the adorable way her smile begins to curl knowing it's for me and I couldn't be more happy I hope you all find your own redhead in blue someday "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! you can't tell from my picture but I'm a redhead...with a little blonde. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice....James |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Got to love us redheads. I was blessed to have born two beautiful ruby jewels of my own. Nice write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zach~ This is just a beautifully word-song of the heart~ I'd say she's fortunate to have you too~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is beautiful, well crafted too! I like it! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Zach... Your imagery brought her to life...well done. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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