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your song to me |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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you breathe . . . words . . . of warm ocean breezes and sea shell melodies playing to my heart your soft love songs summer sun kissed in mocha brown . . . and . . . tan sand sounds wrapping me in a silken slip sarong across my bare . . . exposure s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
a song i wish i knew/felt..... thank you for sharing this, susan. hugs.. s "i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly" |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Lovely images and feelings.....surreal yet felt ~P |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and you are the music that stirs such a melody or is it malady? (grin) enjoyed you babe |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely reading. Joyce |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BEAUTIFUL!!  this is such a keeper.... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
WOW! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Your kind replies are music to my ears - thanks to each and every one of you - you warm my heart -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love this Susan. Sigh! Now where is my song? Oh yeah I am listening to Motorhead at the moment...song called, "One More F------ Time" LOL! Sniff! It is the only music I have today! sigh |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sensous as a silk sand wrapp |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such sensual beauty. *S* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Kevin - you make me laugh - thank you - needed that - hugs- Inky - thanks for the smooth sensuous girlfriend Suthern - what a lovely reply - thank you Hugs all - s If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!!! Eric |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
you have painted a write here... and nicely too regards sudhir |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This makes me want Summer to hurry in....and never leave!!! Well done, Susan. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Susan I do like your words. Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you dear poets and my dear friends - your kind replies warm my heart - hugs -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
OMG, Susan! This was great!  ....jo |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Jo! Hugs - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Susan, I love the natural pause in this. It breathes with the reader, as one! Will love this in the library! miscellanea |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thanks misc' - you smile me - hugs my friend - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Soft, splendid, and truly enjoyed! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Susan as usual you have the ability to move us like waves on a shifting sand shore.. Goldenrose. Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thanks Tex  Goldenrose - most kind my friend - you smile me Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ah the sound of an ocean's body very nice bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you bernie S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I needed a smile...and this is the poem that gives it to me. I know I commented on it before...but it needs to be brought back. Still loving this piece very much Susan. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Susan, this was beautiful and very much enjoyed my friend, you have a great way with words, singing them as a siren song. Sincerely Rick |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Kevin - if I can gift you a smile with my words, then truly I am blessed - Rick - thank you so, my friend - your kindness warms my heart - Love to you both - SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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