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ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

0 posted 2005-04-28 01:41 PM

Space filled with nothing
touch it and see
start your mind whirling
send it through me

Feel what I'm feeling
and figure me out
step foot in my puzzle
and wander about

Walk to my soul
stare into his eyes
be gentle about it
hes quiet sometimes

When you see a warm smile
and his eyes start to glow
it's safe to come closer
step into... my soul

He'll offer his hand
so dont be afraid
he just wants to show you
my hearts serenade

Ive opened, before you
my innermost parts
so you may explore me
and see where it starts

It isnt all perfect
and there's more than you see
but its where it all started
welcome to... me.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-04-28 01:44 PM

I do love a quiet man

nice write here Brian

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

2 posted 2005-04-28 01:48 PM

Wow. Stunning. I am very happy to be in your company. Thank you for the very truthful welcome. I appreciate your truthfullness...your openess. It is a very lovely poem.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-04-28 02:00 PM

Feel what I'm feeling
and figure me out
step foot in my puzzle
and wander about

Walk to my soul
stare into his eyes
be gentle about it
hes quiet sometimes

Wonderfully written piece. I really enjoyed this. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2005-04-28 02:45 PM

you make a girl want to climb in and get comfortable...make herself to home and stay...

really enjoyed this

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-04-28 02:59 PM

this was like a gentle wade through a stream, in summer...beautiful

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-04-28 03:44 PM

Nice to meet you...but I think we have met before...LOL..

But now I FEEL you and see right through..
~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-04-28 04:41 PM

Absolutely beautiful!!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

8 posted 2005-05-02 12:10 PM

Thank you all so very much for your kind replies, very heartfelt and appreciated

HugZ
Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

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