I Would Rather (The Sun is Nothing Without Your Smile)

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Open Poetry #35

I Would Rather (The Sun is Nothing Without Your Smile)

Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2005-04-30 12:55 PM

The sun is shining brightly today
welcoming and warm
but it is nothing
without your glimmering smile
to complement it.
I would rather just sit here
at the foot of the bed
in the darkness
and massage your aching feet
than walk in bliss without you
i would rather just sit here
with you, you only
and i never want to leave.

(wow! it has been a little while since i've posted thanks to writers block. Well i hope you enjoy my poem that has broken me away from writer block's shackles.)

nice use of muffin

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