Open Poetry #35 |
The Gift of Life |
WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
It is said that everyone is born with a gift, something special to each, individually tailored; not teachable, not learn-able, nor transferable; one’s special pattern in the fabric of life. There are some who keep this knowledge and often live remarkable, memorable lives but most, sadly, never discover they have the gift and live their lives as followers and slaves, playing lotteries and cheering others on. What are some of the things that hide the gift? Traditions, dogma, the tick-tock humdrum that quickly fills every moment of one’s life– Taxes, mortgages, properties and relationships; fears and tears, losses and wars and petty quarrels; taking responsibility for things of no consequence; arguments over race, gender and brand names and who deserves to win a cup or a pennant: and each emotion drives the gift further from the mind. It is generally believed that life is a quest, that all who enter life are on a mission of discovery: strange as it may seem, the quest of life is simply to find itself before it all ends. Hence, the quest of life is the quest for life and stranger yet, it is the quest for life that ensures life’s continuance for a life lived without passion is a life never lived at all. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well done, thank you for this read...it gives the reader many images to ponder...enjoyed |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent-enjoyed..... --------ice ><> |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is a fabulous piece and deserving of many re-reads. Enjoyed very much. TD |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Seriously, I was going to play lotto this weekend...is that wrong? I just want to be independently wealthy so I don't have to work and can travel and sit on the beach sipping pina colada's all day... that isn't asking too much, right? "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I'm appreciating the wisdom you share through your words. The last verse is really great, but you really nailed me with this one: "taking responsibility for things of no consequence" You are so right! I agree. This is one to re-read. Sending it to the top now. Thanks. miscellanea |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Depth, or eloquence....depth or eloquence.....BOTH! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write something we all need to read |
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