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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-04-29 12:47 PM



Convey your spirit onto  me
sin with me in every waking
delight


Fail miserably with me, beside me
as long as you don't hide from me.

Don't shut me out, but embrace me, My
dear for my heart has alot of love to
give and my eyes have alot of tears

I shall cry for you when your in distrest
I shall smile when things are going well

When you find yourself to the point of no
return, I shall be there for you. Your sancautary
in this crazy world.

For I rather die a thousand
deaths then inflict pain upon you.

The speaical love that you possess inside is
priceless don't be around to invite it. Let it
take hold of you and raise you to the highest of
mountains my dear

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2005-04-29 05:26 AM


nice write...would read better if you fixed the spelling errors though
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-04-29 09:01 AM


Fail miserably with me, beside me
as long as you don't hide from me.

This was marvelous, giving off a scents of adoration, wanton, yet, with the understanding of love's growth...enjoyed this

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2005-04-29 04:58 PM


thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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