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These Eyes |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 I'm seeing you, look at me, my mind has not a thought, stepping miles into your soul, Silent picture speaks to me, burning holes into my center, stareing, you see my core, right through, Walking into my soul with your light, tourching the walls of abandonment, this heart, you now claim as home, These eyes, speak in code, silent, but ever so loud, pounding, at the door of my heart, Spinning, my mind in circles, riding the merry-go-round, tickleing me inside, like a child, When the blinds close, twisted shut, till they see again, you become the love song I compose, Danceing, inside my mind, Two thoughts, poetry & rhyme, together we blend, lifes' harmony, Underneath your microscopes, my deepest truths are revealed, my secrets, I confide, Pictures you take, photos, storeing them inside, your photographic memory, These are the eyes, deep, dark, mysterious, of want and love, They project a magic spell, your heart, no longer your own, See me, see you, see love... Reflecting inside these eyes... "Let me not to the marriage of true minds Admit impediments; love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
James...thank you from my heart! ~ARH "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well written..and deep.. Goldenrose. Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very pretty read, such a flow of feelings and emotion. Well written, dear lady. Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Every thing your write brings a sense of yoru inner sensuality and romance. I love every word of your poetry. Congratulations! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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