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From the First [deep from the archives of 2000...] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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From The First You beckon me, I willingly follow, over rocky barrier, ‘cross sleepy hollow, along the river’s stream, by the water’s fall, through the sun’s shine, just to heed the call… and were you then, or are you now, a piped piper of this dream, this most intangible stretch of gossamer’s thread and melodious sound with which so tightly you bind ‘round my heart, keeping me close, and I snuggle into your breast, safe, warm, home… ah comfort, come thus it is found then here, right here in this, the spirit of you, your essence encircling me in garland of gold as if from the first day the earth saw light and amazed, when the light saw us and were you then, or are you now, a piped piper of this dream, this most intangible stretch of gossamer’s thread and melodious sound with which so tightly you bind ‘round my heart, keeping me close, and I snuggle into your breast, safe, warm, home… I shan’t ask the question for the truth lies here, in your eyes, in this kiss in this bliss on this plane to which I shall come again, and again and were you then, or are you now, a piped piper of this dream, this most intangible stretch of gossamer’s thread and melodious sound with which so tightly you bind ‘round my heart, keeping me close, and I snuggle into your breast, safe, warm, home… Yes… Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
ah comfort, come thus it is found then here, right here in this, the spirit of you, your essence encircling me in garland of gold as if from the first day the earth saw light and amazed, when the light saw us You shine bright, dear Sunshine! Beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my goodness. How lovely is this?!! Keepin' it.  Hugs, Chrislane Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
The knowledge that Sunshine wrote it is enough to pull me in, and your contentment is what I take away. Good job! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for bringing this back |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is SO lovely...thank you for reposting. ~Hugs to you my hip-sis~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie Some things are timeless, like this poem and the feelings written therein.  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beauty revisited. Thanks. Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah comfort, come thus it is found then here, right here in this, the spirit of you, your essence encircling me in garland of gold as if from the first day the earth saw light and amazed, when the light saw us oh mom......this is so softly beautiful... thank you for the beauty of this treasure |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
dreamy lady, simply stunning! always a treat to read you, the images held me attentive, not wanting to reach the end, and it felt like there's much more... |
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