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We are What we Can Bear (a work in progress)
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We are What we Can Bear (a work in progress) |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Link me to a world Unrelated to the Whims of your Unjustified glory Your sweet glorious repose So I may as a rose Spread my love to the Very core of you We are what we can bear And then let me Stand between two sinners And wonder why I don’t belong to a sect In which I am free We are what we can bear Oh! Fill me up to be a part of you So that you may become a Better part of me We are what we can bear I am a cursed soul on This heavenly rock Riddled with its sultry Whereabouts and Gangly wanderers I oft times try to imagine What happened to myself To allow the corruption Within my eyes Recant and reply My unloved heart We are what we can bear I’ve realized No more than the dawn of day Apathy squelches emotion Makes the pain go away Farther from the skin We are what we can bear If I cry between the pages And let hearts shatter my Opinion of innocence I let the world tell me I’m wrong and weak Let the light of day Deny my precious eyes Of freedom We are what we can bear Trust me to sacrifice My eyes to you In ways that will Force my soul’s Undying honesty We are what we can bear I am drawn into you Enveloped within your paradise I’d gladly put away myself In order to matriculate to your Ways of assimilation Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like this God only promises a safe landing, not a calm flight. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I like it but it is only a scaffold for now and is this the place it would finally receive an accolade from, when the ratio is 10 poems to read and comment on, for whenever you write one set of words. Dave |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Thank you for your comments. I truly appreciate them. Dave, I must ask what you mean? I just don't understand...perhaps it is because I have a particularly stressful day and am completely delerious...Could you just explain what you mean? Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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