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Open Poetry #35

Sadness (rictameter)

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

0 posted 2005-04-27 11:09 AM

sadness
unwanted guest
settles in aching heart
erasing smiles and joyous thoughts
dark intruder leaving dream destruction
extinguishing my inner light
dampening my spirit
uninvited
sadness

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Chris Barker
April 2005
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-04-27 11:11 AM

Love ya Chris..

I understand.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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2 posted 2005-04-27 12:10 PM

I know you do Teed. Loving Thanks.

passing shadows
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displaced

3 posted 2005-04-27 12:32 PM

nicely done
I can understand

Nightshade

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4 posted 2005-04-27 12:49 PM

thanks & hugs Dix.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

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Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2005-04-27 05:09 PM

I could feel its ache .... very well done Chris.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

6 posted 2005-04-27 05:11 PM

Chris

I have felt this and know it felt just like your words. A well done rictameter!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2005-04-27 05:57 PM

You desribed it perfectly, Chris Lane.
Very well written, Lady.
Hugs.,
Ethel

Nightshade

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8 posted 2005-04-27 06:17 PM

Craig, Martie & Ethel....thankyou and many hugs.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2005-04-27 10:13 PM

The petals of the flower fade, but fade they must to bloom anew. Well written.
Hugs,
TD

Nightshade

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10 posted 2005-04-27 10:20 PM

You are so right TD. Thankyou for your comments. Hugs!

yv
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

11 posted 2005-04-27 10:59 PM

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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12 posted 2005-04-27 11:09 PM

Many thanks yv.

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