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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-04-25 05:49 PM




The hills roll
An ancient castle

In long grasses
Summer wind

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-04-25 05:58 PM


never been, but see it in this
adagio
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Marrero, La.
2 posted 2005-04-25 07:50 PM


Quite picturesque

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2005-04-25 09:32 PM


i saw all this unfold before my eyes...

fantastic Huan

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4 posted 2005-04-26 01:52 AM


A lesson in how to write short verse with impact.....beautifully done!

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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-04-26 02:46 AM


Nice...James
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6 posted 2007-04-30 07:20 PM


indifference.
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