Open Poetry #35 |
Okinawa |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
The hills roll An ancient castle In long grasses Summer wind |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
never been, but see it in this |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Quite picturesque |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
i saw all this unfold before my eyes... fantastic Huan "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A lesson in how to write short verse with impact.....beautifully done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
indifference. |
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