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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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They’re all In need of repair Even then Out of context with their time Their former glory Will hardly reappear The seedy stores Bereft of modern wares Musty smells Within their walls What’s the point Of even stopping For awhile If you wouldn’t want What’s left for sale |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Huan It sounds like bad end of town boarded up life Well written Dave |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
wonderful description to too many towns. -majnu |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sounds like we shop in the same stores....... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
RL I don’t bother . . . Thanks all for reading John |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
sigh!!! |
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