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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-04-25 04:06 AM


A Lot Like Her

I seen my sweetheart last
night with another man.
They were walking and
laughing in the Wal Mart
parking lot, they were
kissing and they were
holding hands.
I did'nt know what to do.
I thought that she was
my sweetheart, but she
was kissing him and he
was kissing her too.
The two looked so happy
together that I felt
out of place.
If I was to call out to
her and she didn't respond
properly it would be an
ugly disgrace.
And then as the two walked
by me, I took a closer look
just to be sure, and then
I realized, it wasn't her
after all, thank God
that it wasn't her.

JamesLee
April24
2005

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-04-25 07:58 AM


Maybe you need (new) glasses...

All that heartache for nothing

hugs
M

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-04-25 07:58 AM


it all happens in the Wal Mart parking lot, doesn't it?
Cloud 9
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3 posted 2005-04-25 01:18 PM



JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-04-25 06:01 PM


Thank you nakdthoughts, passing shadows and Cloud 9 for the nice responses...this didn't actually happen...I was sitting in the Wal-Mart parking lot late the other night...because I get off work at eleven p.m. and I thought of this subject....James
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
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5 posted 2005-04-26 11:38 PM


Oh wow, It DID happen to me!!  I almost couldnt believe this, had to read it again... in the Walmart parking lot!  Nice read to say the least   Big sigh when I finally saw it wasnt LOL

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2005-04-28 01:55 AM


Sorry Brian if something similar to this happened to you...this idea just came to my head in the parking lot...perhaps I wrote this because of something that happened to me a long time ago...I overheard my ex-wife talking to someone on the phone, perhaps a girlfriend, saying she didn't know what she would do without me, and it suddenly dawned on me that she was talking about another man...James
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