Open Poetry #35 |
A Lot Like Her |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A Lot Like Her I seen my sweetheart last night with another man. They were walking and laughing in the Wal Mart parking lot, they were kissing and they were holding hands. I did'nt know what to do. I thought that she was my sweetheart, but she was kissing him and he was kissing her too. The two looked so happy together that I felt out of place. If I was to call out to her and she didn't respond properly it would be an ugly disgrace. And then as the two walked by me, I took a closer look just to be sure, and then I realized, it wasn't her after all, thank God that it wasn't her. JamesLee April24 2005 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Maybe you need (new) glasses... All that heartache for nothing hugs M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it all happens in the Wal Mart parking lot, doesn't it? |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you nakdthoughts, passing shadows and Cloud 9 for the nice responses...this didn't actually happen...I was sitting in the Wal-Mart parking lot late the other night...because I get off work at eleven p.m. and I thought of this subject....James |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Oh wow, It DID happen to me!! I almost couldnt believe this, had to read it again... in the Walmart parking lot! Nice read to say the least Big sigh when I finally saw it wasnt LOL Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sorry Brian if something similar to this happened to you...this idea just came to my head in the parking lot...perhaps I wrote this because of something that happened to me a long time ago...I overheard my ex-wife talking to someone on the phone, perhaps a girlfriend, saying she didn't know what she would do without me, and it suddenly dawned on me that she was talking about another man...James |
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