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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2005-04-22 01:00 PM

Wrap me in your sweet caress
show me the hidden tenderness
that lies within a heart of gold
a story remains, yet untold.

Melt me in    desires    blush of sin
hear loves rhapsody play again
meet me at the edge of our dreams
where rays of love brightly gleam.

In beat of time,    two hearts unite
in precious union     of spirit delights,
one breathe   one moment   frozen in time
touching of souls in loves light, divine.

This kiss of passions bliss,    I await
While praying us to be   favored…..by fate.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-04-22 01:01 PM

Melt me in desires blush of sin
hear loves rhapsody play again
meet me at the edge of our dreams
where rays of love brightly gleam.

Beautiful Donna. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-04-22 01:08 PM

Beautiful

Dave

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-04-22 01:13 PM

E X Q U I S I T E !!

Lovely one, pretty lady~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-04-22 02:29 PM

yanno? I'm just not sure about this title...
hmmm...

hey, thanks everyone!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

5 posted 2005-04-23 05:26 AM

This i liked very much..has a lovely feel to it..like it really meant something in your heart...thank you for it..

Goldenrose.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2005-04-25 11:12 AM

Thanks GR. I was merely trying to see if I could still write a bit of romance, it has been awhile since I tried.

Thank you each!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

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