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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2005-02-20 12:22 PM

I love it when you pour the syrup so thick and rich
my tongue is nearly overwhelmed
and I am capsized

in a passionate stream of words flowing
as if the sun and moon
were secretly conjoined

your rich vocabulary and imagery tease me
with a taste of divinity’s offerings,
leaving me sated and starving at the same time

and oh, how I love it
when you play my heart with colorful words;
please, please don’t ever stop

play me endlessly with all that you have,
for I am an empty vessel,
waiting to be filled

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2005-02-20 12:39 PM

Hi Kacy...love this. Wonderful praise you have penned here for someone very special it sounds like. Bravo!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-02-20 12:44 PM

'Tis for all the wonderful writers here, my friend, including you! I love the beautiful imagery and play of words that are painted upon this blue screen.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-02-20 01:09 AM

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

4 posted 2005-02-20 02:20 AM

LOL, I take it you liked it, Dixie.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-02-20 09:55 AM

...in a passionate stream of words flowing
as if the sun and moon
were secretly conjoined

your rich vocabulary and imagery tease me
with a taste of divinity’s offerings,
leaving me sated and starving at the same time...

~*~

Scratching the essence
seeing beyond the surface...

that's what a good writer does
and leaves it behind for us to sniff out,
savor, and become satiated...

and like Chinese food,
leaves us hungry for more...

Yep!

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

6 posted 2005-02-20 10:01 AM

My poetry sings
Said with passionate fervor
Oh... not just mine ...sigh

But your poetry does sing. Well done!! Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2005-02-20 10:29 AM

nice write

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

8 posted 2005-02-20 02:19 PM

Great write!

Eric

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2005-02-20 05:58 PM

Kacy, isn't that just what this forum does?!! Sure love this write. Happy day!

.....jo

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

10 posted 2005-02-22 07:25 AM

Wow! what a great surprise reading you this morning....loved it!

~ARh

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard

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