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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2005-02-20 02:31 PM

Each breath falls on
its own.

The gravity of this moment
pulls to our awareness.

Following the breath...we meet
on the ground of our shared
existence.

And now there is nowhere
left to fall...

Except
within.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-02-20 02:32 PM

breathtaking - *sigh*

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-02-20 02:35 PM

awesome!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-02-20 02:40 PM

Wonderful Eric! Much enjoyed.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-02-20 02:43 PM

Eric, I absolutely adored this spiritually expressed poem of love.

If one goes within, one never goes without.

Love & Light,
Linda

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2005-02-20 03:00 PM

Ericc
Enjoyed the read.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2005-02-20 03:27 PM

Awesome write Ericc! hugs, Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2005-02-20 04:19 PM

Dual mystery and majesty.
A certain and complete cohesion of heart and soul.
TD

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2005-02-20 04:23 PM

Ah...fall deep, fall well...

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2005-02-20 04:41 PM

Eric

Your words take my breath away every single time.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2005-02-20 06:00 PM

Ah....another lesson, from the master of tiny love poems....well done!

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______________Ratleader______________

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2005-02-20 06:37 PM

You are the master at catching moments, Eric!

....jo

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2005-02-20 08:28 PM

You leave me in awe...never failing to leave
a lasting memory of a written moment.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2005-02-21 01:02 PM

Ericc....Always beautiful and well done!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

14 posted 2005-02-21 01:03 PM

Beautiful!!!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2005-02-21 01:41 PM

Which is a pretty good destination. *S*

Excellent work! *S*

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

16 posted 2005-02-21 05:19 PM

And "within" the treasure is displayed in all its splendour!

Within ... together, it's the same!

You are beautiful!

I love you.
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

17 posted 2005-02-22 07:13 AM

So much power, packed within a small package, a gift!

your poems are always a gift to read!

~ARh

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard

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