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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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You do that... when you weave your words softly around souls in shimmer songs of soothing scented slightly with seductive suggestion leaving sighs in your wake... You do that... when you twist mornings of tender touch into tumbles of laughter by your tendance through thought words that tantalize eyes to twinkling... You do that... Smile maker.... {thank you for the smiles my friend...} I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-21-2005 12:59 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hmmmm, tremendous tribute which could certainly fit many poets in this page so aptly...wonderful write....and acknowledgement of a special someone... thank you for sharing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, Lee wrote it before I could.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
GS...sy and lee said it and I echo it you did someone lovely proud...enjoyed this babe |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very sweet Donna! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Happy Friday everyone. Thank you all, for such smiles! Hugs. I really want to care, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Just seen this...a lovely poem..as usual from you Donna..thank you.. Goldenrose. Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just sweet  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
when you twist mornings of tender touch into tumbles of laughter by your tendance through thought words that tantalize eyes to twinkling... Might I have a tumble of that twinkling? Hugs to you fine poet for this lovely tribute to the poet who so adorningly inspires you...wonderful write |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh you have me smiling with this one Donna Lovely work genteel one  Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
again, my thanks... PEACE |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Now I'm smiling too....this is about as sweet a tribute as I've seen. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
smiling here for you have made so many smile you are truly a smile maker you were looking in the mirror, weren't you? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ed, thank you so much. Kacy?? omg gal.....I avoid mirrors at all cost  ....but if I have given a smile, then I am grateful. Thank you, everyone. I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Take that title for your own, dear lady... it seems everyone reading this leaves with a smile. *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
aha...I was away when you posted this one... so glad it was popped to the top again... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Smiles, as small as they may seem have the strenght of rainbows. I remember so well when someone turned my day around just by flashing a smile. Stronger than that you will never find. Thanks for a beautiful write. best,marty |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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