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Told You So
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Told You So |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ When the show no longer goes on before the last curtain call I told you so. And in my telling of heart I invaded your space. Putting distance between the simple concept without human contact, seems so little to give and less to receive. But uncertainty is no consequence to me for life is a short sequence featured film so to speak and I am not ashamed. My feelings are not indifferent they are true to the words I write, so if I cease to exist for you I am better for them. Life may be a stage, another poem on a page but compassion is not rehearsed or a role to act out and memorize even if the meaning is lost. I will come away when the end draws near taking my place without any misgivings or regrets for my part. ~*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
no regrets dear lady....no regrets.. treasure every precious moment...  bluesy..this touches, deeply m'friend... I really want to care, |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
This was so excellently expressed ....I especially liked this part ...i can relate to this " My feelings are not indifferent they are true to the words I write, so if I cease to exist for you I am better for them." Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is deep a good write |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Life may be a stage, another poem on a page but compassion is not rehearsed or a role to act out and memorize even if the meaning is lost." Well, look what I get to read with my coffee this morning. Nice job there Bluesy...  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write...one of my(many!) favorites. Eric |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
 and the crowd goes wild!!! ... a well written piece, very fitting to your giving heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Bluesy! I can relate well to this. Heart hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Excellent words Dave |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Lori,  A beautiful, heartfelt poem, as always. I especially like these last verses..... My feelings are not indifferent they are true to the words I write, so if I cease to exist for you I am better for them. Life may be a stage, another poem on a page but compassion is not rehearsed or a role to act out and memorize even if the meaning is lost. I will come away when the end draws near taking my place without any misgivings or regrets for my part. Hugs, Ethel  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori "My feelings are not indifferent they are true to the words I write, so if I cease to exist for you I am better for them." Yes, indeed you are!! "Life may be a stage, another poem on a page but compassion is not rehearsed or a role to act out and memorize even if the meaning is lost." Wonderful positive impact in your words, my friend. Well done!!  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always humbled by your gift of heart. TD |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
If nothing else, I am famous for second guessing myself. At the same time, it would be hard to find my peace if I didn't make my feelings known. Most importantly, it's about not having any regrets, because I ain't taking that with me!! Thank you for reading this, and for sharing your smiles with me today. They go a long way, and mean so much~ |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I have certainly missed reading you lady !!! This was beautiful, and I agree with you about not taking the regrets with us.... geez, I have enough baggage to carry lol   Choose to live, and love and all the in betweens. Dry your eyes, and shelter your heart and let the pendulum swing. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
when one looks from the window they must keep in mind the window has it's own slant on the image I enjoyed reading your work here hope all is well |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
as always I enjoy catching your words you "space invader"  hugs M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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